2020 P5JS sketch assignment 4/ Critique notes

https://homepages.utoledo.edu/acoote/Assignment4/




-Critique Notes-

-Do more research about time period typography, graphic design, history, patterns, political influences, and fashion, and music influences that had an impact on the 70's

-make a custom cursor or get rid of the cursor in general

-Think about writing about this work, what inspired it, why it excites me, and what is its purpose. (within a blog post or on your website)

- saturation of the colors is too dense, lighten the saturation

- change the speeds of the circles and loop them faster

- Potentially incorporate collage within the p5js project

- play with language and words and how they may change the users experience

- Look into prevalent styles, location, and era based graphic design

- Haptic feedback can help with providing another element to the users experience (sound, movement)

- build a strong form and content relationship